Talk:Museum of Broadcast Communications
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Goldnpuppy in topic Introduction
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Introduction
editThe current intro tells all about what the museum will have and show, but doesn't explain what it is, as the prior intro did. The article needs editing for basic grammar and references.Goldnpuppy (talk) 15:34, 12 July 2011 (UTC)
- Presumably you are referring to this version of the page, which was reverted to this version after you commented. It seems fair to say the latter version is more encyclopedic by Wikipedia standards (see WP:MOS).--JayJasper (talk) 19:17, 12 July 2011 (UTC)
Yes, the latter does seem more encyclopedic. Thanks. Goldnpuppy (talk) 22:02, 12 July 2011 (UTC)
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