Talk:Murder of Peter Aston

Latest comment: 2 years ago by 62.228.196.201 in topic Extremely confusing

Extremely confusing edit

It is technically incorrect and misleading to name the second perpetrator as “Nicole Louise Pierce” from the onset of the article, because at the time when the crimes were committed his legal name was Paul Luckman. The crime was committed by a certain Paul Luckman and not some “Nicole”. What this individual goes on to do with himself 8 years later is irrelevant to the crime and the greater part of this article, and the mention of the name change and what have you is more than enough in the “Aftermath” section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 62.228.196.201 (talk) 01:11, 21 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Language edit

This article for the most part doesn't show sources and in a lot of places is using rather tabloid language rather than being encyclopedic neutral.RafikiSykes (talk) 13:01, 30 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

Murders edit

This page is almost entirerly about the murder of peter aston. this page should be renamed as such Bomberswarm2 (talk) 08:35, 1 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

I've now moved the page to reflect the focus on the murder over the murder, per WP:BLP1E. clpo13(talk) 22:33, 3 August 2016 (UTC)Reply