Talk:Mr. Monk and the Candidate/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Zanimum in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 14:28, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

I'll review. I've moved the nom from Magazines and print journalism to Television, not sure why it was miscategorized. -- Zanimum (talk) 14:28, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

Warren St. Clair... is that spelling from the credits, from the closed captioning? IMDb is claiming St. Claire... actually, even the infobox claims St. Claire. The "e"-less spelling is more likely, but is there a source?

Passing "Production". (Note that I review the sources last, after I review the prose.)

Passing "Reception", now that I've made some revisions. Note that "[T]he breaks things up (Chrome, 1440 x 900 px), with the quotation mark on one line, and the word on another. Ultimately, this should be reported to Bugzilla or whatever it's called, but to get around it, I've restructured the sentence.

Passing "External links". -- Zanimum (talk) 14:45, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

Passing intro, "Plot", references. I've added the original air date to the fair use template for the image.

St. Clair vs. St. Claire is the only thing remaining, before passing this as a GA. -- Zanimum (talk) 15:17, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review and the corrections you did. I've just changed St. Clair to St. Claire per USA credits; the USA site is confusing: here they use both St. Clair and St. Claire. Variety strengthens St. Claire. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 17:37, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply
Thanks! GA! -- Zanimum (talk) 17:49, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply