Talk:Mozzart (Mozzik album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 15:13, 1 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox

• You already have the sources of the single released in the body of the article, remove them from here
• I'm not sure about linking the producers here to their german wiki page.
• Make changes according to Template:Infobox album#language
• Art cover needs alt description.

 Done

Lead

• "Mozzart is the debut studio album by Kosovo-Albanian rapper Mozzik released on 30 July 2020 by 2 Euro Gang and Urban." → Mozzart is the debut studio album by Kosovo-Albanian rapper Mozzik. It was released on by 2 Euro Gang and Urban Records on 30 July 2020.
• "in German-speaking Europe." → see below
• "Containing songs in Albanian and German, the was " → something is missing here?
• "seven singles, including "Dhelpër dinake", "Zemra ime", "Auf wiedersehen", "Tom & Jerry", "Lass mal", "Madonna" and "Baby", which experienced commercial success in Albania, Austria, Germany and Switzerland." → all of them? The prose says different

Last part removed. Iaof2017 (talk) 17:45, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

• Add the genres of some songs, "It overall incorporates genres of hip hop and R&B music"

 Done

Background and composition

• "recognition in German-speaking Europe" → you mean German-speaking countries?
• Mozzart was released in various countries → formats?
• "It overall incorporates genres of hip hop and R&B music" → this is about some songs in the album, which leads to confusion. Should be "Some of the songs on the album incorporates genres of hip hop and R&B music". Otherwise, it sounds like it is the album and the sources don't back up that

 Done

Singles and reception

• released in November 2019 → released on 8 November 2019, do the same for the other singles.
• Try to put the sources at the end of the sentences so the text doesn't break so much
• attained success in Switzerland → needs to be more specific, peak on the charts?
• while "Baby" also found success in the latter country, including in Germany, where it peaked at number 78 → is this success? I have to strongly disagree, on top of that, this is quite biased
• "considered "Madonna" as a success and predicted "Baby" as another success" → "considered "Madonna" a success and predicted "Baby" to be another success"

 Done

Commercial performance

• Re-title this section as "Reception" and move the reviews here.
• "Mozzart experienced commercial success on the record charts of Austria and Switzerland" → very biased, remove
• "In Austria, the record entered" → In Austria, Mozzart entered
• Mozzart also went on to reach the top 10 at number eight on Switzerland's Album iTunes Chart on 2 August 2020 → this is not a good chart, so please remove it.

 Done

Track listing

• Remove the Apple Music source for the tracklist, the Spotify one is enough

 Done

Charts

• Fine

Release history

• Fine

References

• The author of Telegrafi posts is the publication itself
• A source check has been conducted on references 8-10, 12-16, 18 and 19

Overall

• On hold for seven days, let me know once you are done.

Hey @MarioSoulTruthFan: thank you for the long awaited review. I'm really busy for the next few days with personal stuff, and I would be very pleased if you could give me more time. I will be back no later than two days. Good health to you. :D Iaof2017 (talk) 20:30, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

No problem. Thank you for letting me know, good luck with your personal life. Thanks! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:35, 8 June 2022 (UTC)

Hey MarioSoulTruthFan thank you. I've responded to all of your comments. Iaof2017 (talk) 17:54, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

Made some small changes, see if you are ok with those. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:20, 10 June 2022 (UTC)

Absolutely, thanks! Iaof2017 (talk) 23:08, 10 June 2022 (UTC)