Talk:Mountain Meadows Massacre and Mormon public relations

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Ancheta Wis in topic Poorly constructed sentence

Poorly constructed sentence

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Please clarify 'who what where when etc' in the following sentence:

  • Leonard is one of the co-authors of the book the LDS Church is writing about the massacre.

Right now the sentence fails to answer

  1. Is the book about the massacre?
  2. Is the LDS church writing about the massacre?
  3. Is the LDS church writing a book about Leonard?

--Ancheta Wis (talk) 15:34, 10 September 2008 (UTC)Reply