Talk:Moon Over Manifest

Latest comment: 5 months ago by Peter L Griffin in topic Plot summary style

Plot summary style edit

I just transferred the plot summary from past tense to present tense. But beyond this, it sounds stylistically particularly poor with awkward phrasing and the like. If anyone else would like to help fix this section, let me know. Peter L Griffin (talk) 23:26, 12 December 2023 (UTC)Reply