Talk:Mongolia at the 2022 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 04:03, 2 February 2023 (UTC)

• Hoping to get to this within a few hours. This is my first time reviewing a sports-related article, so please bear with me! 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 04:03, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
• I think that should be all! Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns so that I can know when to reevaluate. Thanks, 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 18:15, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
• Nice work on the changes and thanks for the fast response! I am now happy to pass this article for GA status. Congrats! 𓃦LunaEatsTuna (💬) 00:32, 3 February 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check

Earwig says good to go.

Files

All images are relevant, good quality and copyright-free:

• File:Flag of Mongolia.svg: valid public domain rationale;
• File:Putin attended the opening ceremony of 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics (3).jpg: CC-BY-SA 4.0.

Prose

• Batmönkhiin Achbadrakh and Enkhtuul Ariunsanaa are both wikilinked a few times. Only their first mentions in the lead and body of the article need to be wikilinked.
• In the infobox, unlink Batmönkhiin Achbadrakh in Flag bearer (closing).
• "the nation had sent two cross-country skiers, which were" – change to "who were"
• "The delegation's best finish in any event was 65th by" – I would include 65th of 95 here for added context to readers.
• Unlink the second mentions of opening ceremony and closing ceremony in Background.
• Could Cross-country skiing be expanded upon at all? For instance, possibly how they were selected?
• I would remove the first table (with the athletes) as unnecessary.

 Done except for "Could Cross-country skiing be expanded upon at all". I think it's fine and doesn't need expansion as the information is consistent with Mongolia at the 2018 Winter Olympics, 2010, and 2006, which are all GA.

Ah, I see!

Refs

All sources used are RS. Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 1, 5, 8, 10, 13 or 17.

• Find better publication names for the refs with urls (like www.olympics.com/).
• I would remove the location parameter from ref 2 as this is the only such ciation.

 Done I think, although I'm not quite sure what you mean by "Find better publication names"?

Using names instead of URLs, like www.olympics.com > olympics.com or www.fis-ski.com > International Ski Federation etc.

I see what you mean, I'll go do that, do you want me to wikilink them as well?

That is up to the article writer, but you have already wikilinked the refs for the International Olympic Committee, The Independent and Olympic Council of Asia so I would say yes. Also just noticed ref 10 is formatted "International Olympic Committee (IOC)". Using or not using the abbreviation are both acceptable but make them all consistent :)

 Done I think I fixed all the refs.

@LunaEatsTuna: Pinging LunaEatsTuna.

Other

Navs, cats and most other templates good.

• Move the short description to the very top of the article
• Recommend adding template:Use X English
• Please add WP:ALT text where possible

 Done MasterMatt12^{💬 ● 📝} 23:22, 2 February 2023 (UTC)

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