Talk:Mokshas
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Prehistory
edit"most Mokshas had joined the Hunnic tribal alliance, taken part in the defeat of the Ostrogothic Empire in 377, and subsequently moved eastward and settled in Pannonia." I don't believe it.
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editIt was not very good idea to rename article Mordvins because in this case you had to add information not only regarding Mokshas, Erzyas, Maris, Meshcheras, you had to describe Shokshas, Burtass, etc --Moxelanus (talk) 00:38, 8 December 2007 (UTC)
it wasn't renamed, it was merged. dab (π³) 17:46, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
Beginning cleanup
editI've started copyediting. I am working only on grammar; I know nothing about the Moksha people. The article sorely needs the attention of an expert in the subject. Problems I've come across include:
- The statement that the Mokshas live to the west and south of the big bend of the Volga seems to put them far to the south of where they appear to live today.
- The statement that they moved "east" into Pannonia seems completely impossible. A map is needed for both this and the first point.
- I can find no mention of an "Ants" people anywhere.
- There was no mention (until I added one) of the fact that the Mokshas are a major branch of the Mordvins. More information on the subject is needed. - Metalello (talk) 07:38, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
Finished the major copyediting. The article is still quite rough, though at least it's somewhat legible now.
Problems:
- What is the "Orsiyya war"?
- The history sections contain a badly organized heap of information, much of it with no clear connection to the history of the Mokshas.
- The whole section on racial characteristics seems enormously outdated and full of unnecessary information.
- What is "inferior face" meant to mean? - Metalello talk 07:22, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- Hi, Metalello, as to Mokshas
- They live mostly in Central and Western parts of Mordovia Republic and neighbouring areas of Tambov Oblast, also in Western and Middle parts of Penza Oblast. Mokshas also live in Orenburg Oblast, Bashkortostan, Tatarstan, Altai Krai and diasporas in Estonia, Kazakhstan, USA, Australia.
- Some Finnish sources state some Mokshas settled in Pannonia after they joined Huns. I will check.
- Ants are in fact Antes people
- "There was no mention (until I added one) of the fact that the Mokshas are a major branch of the Mordvins". That's because it's a political issue. According to Britannica Mokshas and Ezyas identify themselves as separate ethnic groups ('Mordvins' is Russian exoethnonym for both) but most Russian sources still use ΠΠΎΡΠ΄Π²Π° (Mordvins) after Republic of Mordovia (federal subject in Russia). According to 1990 Declaration Mordovia had to be renamed into Moksha and Erzya Republic, but governmental decision was postponed. (ΠΠ΅ΠΊΠ»Π°ΡΠ°ΡΠΈΡ ΠΎ Π³ΠΎΡΡΠ΄Π°ΡΡΡΠ²Π΅Π½Π½ΠΎΠΌ ΡΡΠ²Π΅ΡΠ΅Π½ΠΈΡΠ΅ΡΠ΅ ΠΠΎΠΊΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΊΠΎΠΉ ΠΈ ΠΡΠ·ΡΠ½ΡΠΊΠΎΠΉ Π‘ΠΎΠ²Π΅ΡΡΠΊΠΎΠΉ Π Π΅ΡΠΏΡΠ±Π»ΠΈΠΊΠΈ. ΠΡΠΎΠ΅ΠΊΡ//ΠΠ±ΡΠ΅ΡΡΠ²Π΅Π½Π½ΡΠ΅ Π΄Π²ΠΈΠΆΠ΅Π½ΠΈΡ Π² ΠΠΎΡΠ΄ΠΎΠ²ΠΈΠΈ, 1990)
- I know Orsiyya war was described in Kevin Alan Brook's The Jews of Khazaria. 2nd ed. Rowman & Littlefield Publishers, Inc, 2010.ISBNΒ 978-0-7425-4981-4 mentioning of Orsiyya
- most Russian sources after 1917 very rarely mention history of Mokshas and other non-Russian population due to national policy issues.
- racial charasteristics are from Russian sources (1980-s), we have more recent source on the subject [1] from Kazan University, also in Russian. "ΠΡΡΠ»Π΅Π΄ΠΎΠ²Π°Π½ΠΈΡ Π² ΠΏΠ΅ΡΠ²ΡΠ΅ Π΄Π΅ΡΡΡΠΈΠ»Π΅ΡΠΈΡ ΡΠΎΠ²Π΅ΡΡΠΊΠΎΠΉ Π²Π»Π°ΡΡΠΈ ΠΏΠΎΠ·Π²ΠΎΠ»ΠΈΠ»ΠΈ Π²ΡΡΡΠ½ΠΈΡΡ Π°Π½ΡΡΠΎΠΏΠΎΠ»ΠΎΠ³ΠΈΡΠ΅ΡΠΊΠΎΠ΅ ΡΠ°Π·Π»ΠΈΡΠΈΠ΅ ΠΌΠΎΡΠ΄Π²Ρ-ΡΡΠ·ΠΈ, Π΄Π»Ρ ΠΊΠΎΡΠΎΡΠΎΠΉ Ρ Π°ΡΠ°ΠΊΡΠ΅ΡΠ΅Π½ ΡΠ²Π΅ΡΠ»ΠΎΠΏΠΈΠ³ΠΌΠ΅Π½ΡΠΈΡΠΎΠ²Π°Π½Π½ΡΠΉ ΠΌΠ°ΡΡΠΈΠ²Π½ΡΠΉ Π΅Π²ΡΠΎΠΏΠ΅ΠΎΠΈΠ΄Π½ΡΠΉ ΡΠΈΠΏ, Π° ΠΌΠΎΡΠ΄Π²Π΅-ΠΌΠΎΠΊΡΠ° ΠΏΡΠΎΡΠ²Π»ΡΠ΅ΡΡΡ Π³ΡΠ°ΡΠΈΠ»ΡΠ½Π°Ρ Π΅Π²ΡΠΎΠΏΠ΅ΠΎΠΈΠ΄Π½ΠΎΡΡΡ ΡΠ΅Π²Π΅ΡΠΎ-ΠΏΠΎΠ½ΡΠΈΠΉΡΠΊΠΎΠ³ΠΎ ΡΠΈΠΏΠ° ΠΈ ΠΏΡΠΈΠ·Π½Π°ΠΊΠΈ ΠΌΠΎΠ½Π³ΠΎΠ»ΠΎΠΈΠ΄Π½ΠΎΡΡΠΈ. ΠΡΠΌΠ΅ΡΠ°Π΅ΡΡΡ Π±Π»ΠΈΠ·ΠΎΡΡΡ ΠΌΠΎΡΠ΄Π²Ρ Ρ ΠΏΡΡΠ½ΠΎΠ±ΠΎΡΡΠΊΠΈΠΌ Π½Π°ΡΠ΅Π»Π΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅ΠΌ, ΠΈΡΠΏΡΡΠ°Π²ΡΠ΅ΠΌ ΡΠΈΠ»ΡΠ½ΠΎΠ΅ Π²Π»ΠΈΡΠ½ΠΈΠ΅ Π΄ΡΡΠ³ΠΈΡ Π½Π°ΡΠΎΠ΄ΠΎΠ², ΡΡΠΎ ΠΏΡΠΈΠ²Π΅Π»ΠΎ ΠΊ ΡΠΎΡΠΌΠΈΡΠΎΠ²Π°Π½ΠΈΡ Π°Π½ΡΡΠΎΠΏΠΎΠ»ΠΎΠ³ΠΈΡΠ΅ΡΠΊΠΈ ΠΎΡΠ»ΠΈΡΠ°ΡΡΠΈΡ ΡΡ Π³ΡΡΠΏΠΏ."
- "very inferior face" according to the source is literally translated from Russian "ΠΎΡΠ΅Π½Ρ Π½ΠΈΠ·ΠΊΠΎΠ΅ Π»ΠΈΡΠΎ", where Π½ΠΈΠ·ΠΊΠΎΠ΅ is 'low' but I don't know what is exact equivalent term in English. --Moxelanus (talk) 11:32, 9 August 2012 (UTC)
Moxelanus, Thank you very much for all this information. I have edited the article to include most of it. Please let me know if anything needs to be changed. Specific points:
- It seems to me that the move "east into Pannonia" was only by those Mokshans who were in the Mongol army, not the Mokshas in their homeland. If you can confirm this I will rewrite the sentence to make that clearer.
- Regarding the political issue of naming among Mordvins/Eryzas/Mokshas: Some mention should be made of this issue in the article. If you can, please let me know what a fair, balanced way of presenting it would be.
- I've discovered that the Orsiyya are known by many different spellings, and have modified this page and the page on the Arsiyah to reflect this.
- As to the Russian information and the "low face", I speak no Russian, so we will have to wait for someone with better knowledge.
Thanks again. - Metalello talk 02:08, 11 August 2012 (UTC)
There is a proposed merge with Qaratay. The tag has been there since 3 years but the discussion was not created. Am doing it now. --Lemongirl942 (talk) 19:31, 19 October 2016 (UTC)
- Oppose merge on the ground that while the group are Mordvins they appear to be a subset of Qaratay. Klbrain (talk) 07:04, 1 July 2018 (UTC)
Almysh (895-922) signs peace treaty in 1006?
editThe 'Middle Ages' section it is stated: "At the beginning of the 10th century Almush (AlmΔ±Ε) the king of Volga Bulgaria took control of the "Khazar tribute". He converted to Islam, formed an alliance with the caliph of Baghdad Al-Muktafi, and founded a trading post at the mouth of the Oka river. The Kievan prince Vladimir seized Bolghar in 985. King Almush and Prince Vladimir signed a peace and trade treaty in 1006 which was the beginning of an "eternal peace" that lasted for 80 years."
The problem is, Almysh elteber reigned from 895-922, so it would be interesting if he signed any peace treaty in 1006: he died almost 100 years ago. There must be two Almyshes, first is referred in the first sentence, and the other in the second one. 178.48.177.1 (talk) 11:30, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
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Cleaning up History section
editHi, this page recently turned up at ANI, and I noticed that the History section hasn't changed much since; it is still largely an indiscriminate and hard to follow list of events. AN IP user above also expressed concerns that there are apparent inconsistencies in this section, such as a King Almush who ruled in the early 10th century and then signed a peace treaty in 1006.
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