Talk:Mohammad S. Abdeli
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Doomsdayer520 in topic Article cleanup
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Article cleanup edit
Is there anyone who can clean up the second paragraph (his career etc.) of this article, so that it makes more sense i.e. more encyclopedic? I also note that the spelling of his name in the title is different to that in the article. Is it optional or not? Editrite! (talk) 00:00, 13 February 2020 (UTC)
- Also the article contains no information on what YEARS he played, and it should resemble all other football player articles in which year-by-year stats are included. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 22:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)