Talk:Modern elementary mathematics

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Runner Five in topic Copy editing

This page was first created on the basis of content provided by participants in the open course "Developing mathematics: The early years." The content can be found at: http://p2pu.org/en/groups/ed218-developing-mathematics-the-early-years/content/week-2-carnival-of-themes-january-23-29/ http://p2pu.org/en/groups/ed218-developing-mathematics-the-early-years/content/week-2-developing-modern-mathematics-january-23-29/ http://p2pu.org/en/groups/ed218-developing-mathematics-the-early-years/content/week-3-wikipedians-january-30-february-5/

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Hi! This article is really great, but I think the language needs to be simplified & made a bit less technical. I'm going to have a go - while I'm a teacher & I love my pedagogy, my main focus isn't math, so when I finish my edits please feel free to scrutinise them for accuracy on the numbers front. Thanks! Runner Five (talk) 17:41, 11 February 2013 (UTC)Reply

I think I'm done here - for some reason my last edit (the restructure) showed up with my IP. Guess I logged myself out? Wonder if the the tag can be removed. Runner Five (talk) 10:56, 13 February 2013 (UTC)Reply

I removed the tag - I think the article is a lot more readable now. Runner Five (talk) 11:24, 14 February 2013 (UTC)Reply