Talk:Mississippi Highway 308
Latest comment: 5 years ago by SounderBruce in topic GA Review
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GA Review
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Reviewer: SounderBruce (talk · contribs) 13:37, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
Claiming for today. SounderBruce 13:37, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
- Comments
- "United States" (or an abbreviation) should be worked into the first sentence
- Fine. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
- A mention of the county (and its rural nature) should appear
- Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
- "North" and "east of Dubbs" should be moved further apart; perhaps like this: "It then turned north near the community of Dubbs" and ended at MS 4 near White Oak.
- Put the gravel road before its designation (as I assume this is chronological).
- "All of the route" would sound better as "The entire route"
- "the intersection" should be "an intersection"
- "travels" should be "traveled", unless you're talking about the current road, in which case it should be spelled out ("Dubbs Road travels")
- Unincorporated community sounds more human
- "at its intersection" should be "at an intersection"
- "as a gravel road" should be "using an existing gravel road within Tunica County connecting US 61 to MS 4"
- Who maintains the roads now?
- References check out, but I would love something from a non-DOT/map source.
- Newspapers.com showed nothing. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
That's it. Good work. SounderBruce 13:50, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
- I tried my best. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
- Looks good to go. Passing. SounderBruce 14:29, 19 October 2018 (UTC)