Talk:Mireille Bouquet

Major revision

Made a lot of changes, removals, and comment-outs - the article was poorly written (weasel words, colloquial language, confusing sentence structure, irrelevant information) and often diverged quite a bit from the main topic. This article should be about Mireille, not about the story of Noir in general, or about individual episode plot lines.

I'll try to bolster what remains, but it may take some time. Noir fans with writing skills: feel free to jump in. I added a cleanup tag.

The Kirika article is better, but could still use some work as well.

Thanks,

--Luinfana (talk) 06:30, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Greetings, I understand you point, you were saying this article has too much Noir story, right? It's maybe sometimes diverged the main topic, sorry, it was one of my first articles. The article still has some information about Mireille, about the main story, why don't you go and check the List of Noir episodes, though it still a stub article, I'll try to expand it later. So, I'm going to undo you edit, sorry. If you want to provide and clean it up, I have no objection. Take the Intoccabile Act for example.

Thank you. OgasawaraSachiko (Talk) 30 October 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for commenting. Nothing personal about the quality of your article, of course - it just needs a little work. It's fine if you'd prefer to leave it as it stands for now - I'll do some copy-editing when I have some time, and check back when I've finished the rewrite. --Luinfana (talk) 22:12, 30 October 2008 (UTC)