Talk:Ministry of Finance (Soviet Union)/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Arsenikk in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk) 11:30, 8 October 2010 (UTC)Reply

Comments
  •   Done Instead of being a see also link, mention of the Narkomfin Building should be incorporated into the text.
  •   Done Do you write American or British English? Try to be consistent.
  •   Done Please rewrite the "organization" section to prose and avoid all the bulleted lists. Use words to explain the meanings, and feel free to embroider.
  •   Done Please take a look at the disambiguation links on the page.
  •   Done Ref 12 (Ivkin) is dead.
  • (See below) Why are there page numbers in the biography section?
  •   Done In the notes, Huskey is noted as 1992, but no year is mentioned in the biography section.
  •   Done Consider adding appropriate established in and disestablished in categories.

Generally looks pretty good, but I am placing the article on hold until the above is fixed. Arsenikk (talk) 11:30, 8 October 2010 (UTC)Reply

Congratulations with a good article. Arsenikk (talk) 22:31, 8 October 2010 (UTC)Reply