Talk:Mingo Oak/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:42, 3 October 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:42, 3 October 2015 (UTC)

Sturmvogel 66, thank you for engaging in this review. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns in the meantime. -- West Virginian (talk) 08:21, 4 October 2015 (UTC)

@Sturmvogel 66: I was just checking in to see if you've been able to begin the GA review of this article. -- West Virginian (talk) 04:24, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

• No DABs
• External links OK
• 5,500 tonnes (5,400 LT). Use English units as the first unit throughout. If necessary add |disp=flip to measurements to make them display first.

• Done! Thank you for the suggestion! -- West Virginian (talk) 17:25, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

• If 3 companies leased land to the commission surrounding the tree, why then did only one company get it back? Under the terms of the Island Creek Coal Company's lease with the West Virginia Game, Fish, and Forestry Commission, the land around the former tree reverted to the company following the tree's felling.

• One company owned the land (Cole Real Estate Trust) and Island Creek Coal Company and North East Lumber Company both leased the and, Island Creek for the mineral resources and North East for the timber resources. The source only stipulates that Island Creek resumed its lease on the land, but does not mention North East. Take a look at what changes I've made and let me know if these are sufficient. If not, we can leave out this bit. -- West Virginian (talk) 17:25, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

• It's OK now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:42, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

• Is Trace Gap notable? If so add a red link.

• It is not notable. -- West Virginian (talk) 17:25, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

• Put Core in title case.

• My apologies, but what do you mean by "title case?" Core's name is capitalized, and "botanist" is not a formal noun here. -- West Virginian (talk) 17:25, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

• No, I meant the article by Core that you referenced needs to have it's title in title case to match everything else.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:42, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

• Sturmvogel 66, the title has been updated to title case. Thanks for the suggestion! All should be in order now. -- West Virginian (talk) 17:47, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

• Add a cite for this quote: After approximately 30 minutes, Criss yelled, "We're through boys."--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:49, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

• The inline citation has been added following this quote. -- West Virginian (talk) 17:25, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

• Sturmvogel 66, thank you again for taking the time to engage in this review and improve it by doing so! -- West Virginian (talk) 17:25, 15 October 2015 (UTC)