Talk:Milutin Bojić

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Review: May 19, 2016. (Reviewed version).

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Latest comment: 7 years ago7 comments2 people in discussion

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:52, 18 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

Happy to review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:52, 18 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

Fairly well-written. Just a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:00, 18 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

In "Last years and death", he received a months' leave Should it be "month's"?

Fixed.

In the same section, One evening in September 1917...he developed a heavy cough This part could be briefer.

Can you be more specific please? Which sentences exactly?

I mean the part in whole. I think it could be shortened to a line.

Now?

Better. Perhaps I felt we were going into some unnecessary detail. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:00, 19 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

In "Influences and themes", can we add "Irish writer" before "Oscar Wilde"?

Don't see why not.

That should be it. No copyvio detected, no dablinks, images are properly licensed.

Thanks for grabbing the nomination. It had been up for months with no takers. Best, 23 editor (talk) 23:33, 18 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

Sorry it had to wait so long. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 00:26, 19 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

Alright, now ready for promotion. Cheers! Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:00, 19 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

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