Talk:Millefiore Clarkes
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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): ThatOneGal. Peer reviewers: Keï, Maxence FilmStudies.
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editI think that you’re article is very straightforward, written very clearly and is rich in information. You correctly followed the wikipedia form, and I enjoyed the small details that you took the time to add such as the meaning of her name. If I could suggest anything it would maybe be to add more information about her personal life and what drove her to this medium, if you could maybe try to conduct a small interview with her in order to quote her, it would add something valuable to your article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Keï (talk • contribs) 15:50, 13 March 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review
editSalut,
Tout d'abord, je pense que ton article est bien complet, non seulement en matière de contenu, mais également parce que selon moi, les sources sont (suffisamment) complémentaires. Mais j'ai quand même quelques petites remarques: - Tu devrais ajouter une (ou des) photo(s) pour rendre l'article encore plus intéressant. - La remarque sur l'origine du prénom de Millefiore devrait peut être se trouver autre part, je trouve qu'elle est un peu bizarre là où elle est. - Dans le premier paragraphe, tu mets "she" avant de la présenter et j'éviterais de commencer une phrase par "she". - Je mettrais le paragraphe sur sa Vie Privée avant sa Carrière. - Distingue les différents prix qu'elle a reçu (fais en un tableau, ou une liste?). - Le "Music Vidéo" de ta partie sur sa Filmographie se trouve entre "as producer" et "as director", saute quelques lignes ou alors fais en un tableau.
Sinon, je pense que c'est tout. Je n'ai évidemment pas lu toutes tes sources, mais selon moi, il n'y a pas grand chose à redire sur le contenu. De plus, tu as selon moi bien lié ton article aux autres articles sur Wikipedia.
Continue comme ça!
--Maxence — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maxence FilmStudies (talk • contribs) 04:00, 16 March 2016 (UTC)