Talk:Middle-earth: Shadow of Mordor/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:37, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

Looks good. I've never read LoTR so I'll stay away from the lore. JAGUAR  22:37, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

Initial comments

• "and the port to OS X and Linux was done by Feral Interactive" - I recommend splitting this into its own sentence
• "Most praise directed at its solid combat" - I don't see any other adjectives being used in the lead to describe reception, so it might be worth cutting this
• "Two post-release downloadable content, namely Lord of the Hunt and The Bright Lord" - why 'namely'?
• "where the player controls a Ranger by the name of Talion" - this isn't capitalised anywhere else
• "who had worked with the Creative Assembly" - no need for "the" (company isn't named that)
• "Allowing players to choose their story (a sandbox-game pillar)" - if it's appropriate, link sandbox game for new readers
• "To depict volcanic activity, the studio sent a team to eastern Washington" - 'Eastern' is capitalised in its article, so I'd use it here
• "According to the game's developer, Nemesis is too large for older consoles" - is this in the correct tense? Shouldn't this be "was"?
• The paragraphs in the Release section are quite short. I'd recommend merging a couple into larger ones
• "obtained a copy of one of the contracts and analysed it in detail" - analyzed (AmEng)
• No dead links

Close - promoted

Right, after reading through this I can wholeheartedly say this meets the criteria. I don't see any reason to put this on hold, so I'll pass it now. Well done! Looks good for FA to be honest. JAGUAR  22:47, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

@Jaguar: Thank you for the review! I had addressed the problems you raised above. AdrianGamer (talk) 10:18, 17 March 2016 (UTC)