Talk:Michaela Tabb/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Lee Vilenski in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 16:35, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall: Pass
- Pass/Fail:
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editTabb established significant milestones for women officials in professional cue sports
seems incomplete to me. Maybe addwhen she began refereeing professionally on the pool circuit in 1997
- Reworded Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
Personal life
edit- Could this be moved above "Playing career"? Just timeline wise, I feel it makes sense to mention her youth before her playing career
- Moved Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
- It is also odd that her birthday is mentioned under playing career but nothing else
- Moved birthdate to personal life Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
References
edit- Ref 13 needs author (Hector Nunns)
- Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
- Ref 14 doesn't mention
On 20 January 2008, she refereed her first Triple Crown final at the 2008 Masters
or the final score of the Welsh Open- Whoops, the citation is in the wrong place. Fixed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for looking at this HickoryOughtShirt?4. I've covered the above Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:53, 10 October 2020 (UTC)