Talk:Mic Drop (song)/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Ashleyyoursmile in topic GA Review
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GA Review
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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 17:28, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
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Because of your work on "Lost in Your Light", I will be taking this on. Excited to review it! LOVI33 17:28, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
- LOVI33, thank you for taking this on. Anticipating your comments.
--Ashleyyoursmile! 17:47, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- "cover for Steve Aoki remix featuring Desiigner" → "Cover art for Steve Aoki remix featuring Desiigner"
- Instead of having two separate sections for the music videos in the infobox, just have one section titled "Music videos" and both videos under it titled "Mic Drop (Steve Aoki remix)" and "Mic Drop (Japanese version)". See Be the One (Dua Lipa song), for reference.
- "picked it as a standout track," on the EP? If so, change to: "picked it as a standout track, on Love Yourself: Her."
- "Love Yourself World Tour (2018-19)." → "Love Yourself World Tour (2018–19)."
Background and release
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Music and lyrics
edit- "musician Steve Aoki (pictured) produced" → "musician Steve Aoki (pictured) produced", on img text
Critical reception
edit- "received generally favourable" → "was met with generally favourable"
- "Reviewing for Clash magazine," → "Reviewing for Clash,"
Accolades
edit- Year-end lists → Year-end lists for "Mic Drop"
- "Critic/Publication" → "Publication", since all are from companies/websites
- "Ref." → "Ref.", using Template:abbr
- Center citations in ref column
- Remove italicization on YouTube Rewind
Commercial performance
edit- "December 4-10, 2017" → "December 4–10, 2017"
Music videos
edit- Looks Good!
Live performances and other usage
edit- Looks Good!
Track listings
edit- Remove the writers and producers as they are listed below in the Credits and personnel section
Credits and personnel
edit- Target liner notes to itself
Charts
edit- Looks Good!
Sales and certifications
edit- Change to "Certifications and sales", for alphabetical order.
- Ditto for table caption
Release history
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Notes
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References
edit- Make sure all these are archived.
- Copyvio score looks good at 24.8%.
- All refs look good.
External links
edit- Looks Good!
Final comments and verdict
editOn hold for now. Great job on this! Extremely well written. LOVI33 02:27, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
- LOVI33, extremely happy to have responded to all your comments. Please let me know if I missed out anything else. Thank you so much for the review!
--Ashleyyoursmile! 04:41, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
- Great, That's a pass! LOVI33 15:42, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
- LOVI33, Many thanks for this! --Ashleyyoursmile! 17:10, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
- LOVI33, extremely happy to have responded to all your comments. Please let me know if I missed out anything else. Thank you so much for the review!
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