Hello all. Am I lacking anything in this, my first article? Many thanks (AndreBski (talk) 12:36, 26 March 2009 (UTC))Reply
I came across this article patrolling the backlog for the NP. It's good to see such a well written piece in the list- the amount of spam and one sentence articles I come across! You have the makings of a fine article here, after a skim read, the one thing I'd say is that it's lacking WP:RS. There are some, but, ideally, there'd be a citation for more or less every fact in there to ensure that information is factually correct and can be verified easily. Also, the article may be within the scope of a wikiproject. If a relevant one can be found, its members may be able to give some more pointers and it might get the article some more traffic. Keep up the good work. HJ Mitchell (talk) 09:50, 17 April 2009 (UTC)Reply
