Talk:Meet the Woo Tour/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 13:16, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will happily review this later today even as I'm waiting for you to finishing reviewing "Clique", as this article is quite small. --K. Peake 13:16, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• "of his two mixtapes" → "of his two mixtapes,"
• "and consisted of concerts" → "and had been set to consist of concerts"

Background and development

• 1 offers a mention of how Pop Smoke's legal troubles were facing him at the time of the tour announcement; this is notable
• 2 references Pop Smoke sharing the promotional flyer; give a mention of this in the article
• "concert tour, Meet the Woo Tour," → "concert tour the Meet the Woo Tour"
• "his two mixtapes," → "his two mixtapes"

•  Not done remove the wikilink and comma --K. Peake 19:46, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

• "while tour dates for the UK" → "while dates for the United Kingdom"
• "revealed on February 13." → "revealed on February 13, 2020."
• Since this section covers both background and development, are you sure you can't find any info about the synopsis, stage props, or other things that were planned for the concerts?

Kyle Peake, there were only sources that told the dates and locations of the tour. As you know, Pop Smoke was murdered before he had any plan for any of this stuff...The Ultimate Boss (talk) 19:22, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

The Ultimate Boss That is fine then since this information is not a necessity for cancelled tour articles... add the things I mentioned the sources talking about, however. --K. Peake 19:28, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Tour cancellation

• Ref 9 should be at the end of the last sentence since it backs up that info too. However, it is not mentioned by any of the sources that the number of men were four, plus it only said the person had a "mask" not a ski one by mention and I can't seem to see any reference to him getting shot twice.

• The ski mask part is kept

• 7 mentions specifically that he died due to a torso wound; add a sentence about this.

Canceled shows

• Remove the reason part since not only is it the same for every show, but you referenced this in the previous section

References

• Copyvio score looks amazing at 3.8!
• Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool

•  Not done unless the tool is broken for you? --K. Peake 19:46, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

• Cite Twitter as publisher instead for ref 4
• Cite Facebook as publisher instead for ref 5
• Remove wikilink on Twitter for ref 6 and cite as publisher instead
• Ref 7 and 8 are duplicates; make sure to keep the current one though since PF is a lot more reliable than TMZ

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until you have fixed everything which shouldn't be long with this short article, but it was good to review one of yours for the first time in a while! --K. Peake 17:10, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Kyle Peake, done with all of your concerns. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 19:32, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

The Ultimate Boss Nice to see you have responded so quickly; I have done a brief amount of copy editing for things that did not exist as issues at the time of my review. Good work, but you have missed a few points and I've pointed them out above. --K. Peake 19:46, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Oops... Sorry I missed those. Done. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 19:55, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

The Ultimate Boss You still have not got rid of the ski mask mention or removed the wikilink and comma for mixtapes in the body. --K. Peake 21:10, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Kyle Peake Found a source that said one of them was wearing a skin mask; and removed comma and link. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 07:07, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

The Ultimate Boss That is good on your part, I just made an edit to the lead that I forgot to suggest and fixed the table where you had only partially implemented my suggested change about removing the reason. ✓ Pass! --K. Peake 07:11, 23 January 2021 (UTC)