Talk:Matrilineal society of Meghalaya/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:07, 29 June 2016 (UTC)

General

• No copyvio/dablink issues
• 1 deadlink [1]
  • Fixed

Lead

• It is "practise" not "practice"
  • Done
• No citations needed in lead unless you say something controversial
  • Removed citations from the lead to main body with some text

Background

• Khasiis are an ancient tribe "Khasi"
  • Yes, done

Rights, roles and responsibilities

• The birth of a girls is celebrated while the birth of a son is accepted "girl". I think you should say "simply accepted" to emphasise the point
  • Done
• They enjoy total security, unlike the rest of the country Sure these are the words of the source? And say "in the rest"
  • Done
• A successful career women of this society Meaning?
  • Clarified
• matrilocal and duolocal Meaning?
  • Wiki link for "matrilocal" and explanation for "duolocal" provided
• The youngest daughter of this society, the Ka Khadduh, inherits the ancestral property Repeated earlier in the section. Mention this there
  • Done
• (3,000 members[5]) Place the ref outside the bracket
  • Shifted
• equal rights discrimination against men Error? This part has no clear meaning
  • Corrected
• In a Meghalaya Legislative Assembly of 60 members, there are only four women Mention the year this data pertains to
  • Year specified.Nvvchar. 02:41, 30 June 2016 (UTC)

• Thanks for the review. All issues have been addressed. Please see if any more corrections are needed.Nvvchar. 02:41, 30 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:51, 30 June 2016 (UTC)