Talk:Mary Meader/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Editorofthewiki

Quite an interesting article, and what seems to be a very interesting life. I enjoyed reading it.

Lead:

Early life:

The flight:

Later life and philanthropy

Death

References:

  • I am very troubled with such a heavy reliance on one source. I get nervous when I cite a source more than five times. I believe you should be able to replace many of these with newspaper accounts or magazine stories. Some may be more difficult to find, but you would be surprised what newspaper websites will allow you to do. Don't underestimate the capacity of your local library either. I would search major newspapers and magazines in Michigan, and National Geographic's website. I noticed the article is not part of WP:MICH. If you're not in Kalamazoo or Michigan, I would suggest asking these folks for assistance. With more sources, I hope you will be able to expand the section on her early life.

You have seven days to take care of these issues. Please reply here or on my talk page if you need clarification. Thank you and good luck. --Moni3 (talk) 21:51, 22 April 2008 (UTC)Reply

Well, bummer. It's been seven days and no changes. I'm removing it from the list of GA nominees. --Moni3 (talk) 12:38, 29 April 2008 (UTC)Reply
Dang. I completely forgot about this article. I will address your ideas and renominate. Editorofthewikireview my edits here! 00:57, 30 April 2008 (UTC)Reply