Talk:Mary K. Okheena

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Diptanshu Das in topic Deletion notice

Deletion notice

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Hello, I have been informed that this article has been marked for deletion. I do not want this article deleted. I was told by the commentator that I must delete the line that says "{{proposed deletion/dated...}}" however, no such line exists in my article. If there are any specific edits, I would like to be notified so that I may change them so that the article does not get deleted. JasmineJazzChapman (talk) 15:03, 7 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

I did that here. Vexations (talk) 15:31, 7 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
@JasmineJazzChapman:: Yes, indeed I had left a deletion note on the article Mary K. Okheena. Although I had overlooked the entry in the biographical dictionary, the fact remains that the information contained in the article should come from reliable sources. Although the source of much of the information is cited, I found a paucity of reliable sources for the given personality. @Vexations:: I would leave it upon you to decide what to do about the article or how to improve it. Diptanshu 💬 17:23, 7 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

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I reverted the proposed deletion because I noticed there is an overlooked source that would satisfy our notability criteria (an entry in a biographical dictionary), but the the article is still very weak. The long list of works reads like a sales catalogue and should be removed, and the sources used currently are weak, because they are not independent. The section Other Artists Who Have Printed Her Work Include But Are Not Limited To: is completely unsourced and underlinked (do we have articles on these artists?) and to mention retailers is unacceptable. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a platform for promotion. Vexations (talk) 16:41, 7 April 2018 (UTC)Reply