Talk:Martin AM Mauler/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 08:55, 26 August 2014 (UTC)

The ships are just about all done, let's start with the planes... Overall, this looks really good. I made a few tweaks to minimise the feedback on the text, but please check you are OK with the changes. In terms of comments, just the following:

Lead

• this doesn't seem to read well: "...the Navy standardized on the smaller and simpler Douglas AD Skyraider." Maybe replace "standardized" with "switched to"?
• I changed the original BTM to XBTM because there wasn't any reference to it being known as the BTM in the body of the article? The paragraph beginning "The first XBTM-1 made its..." mentions the change to AM-1 without mentioning it was originally BTM.

Footnotes

• Something wrong with formatting of cite 23.

Bibliography

• the Green & Pollinger and the Wilson refs don't appear to be cited.

Other stuff

Just so that people know I checked these:

• no duplicate links
• no disambig links
• external links check OK
• image tags look fine.

I'll check back in a few days. Zawed (talk) 08:55, 26 August 2014 (UTC)

• Thanks for the feedback and for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:57, 1 September 2014 (UTC)
  • Always a pleasure, passing as GA. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 08:25, 2 September 2014 (UTC)