Talk:Mario Power Tennis/GA1

GA Review

OK, I should be done reading the article soon. First, some spelling/grammar.

• "Power Shots". → "Power Shots."
  • Are you sure about this? I thougt that the full stop only had to be within the marks when the content was part of a whole sentence.
• 81 percent → 81%
  • Per Wikipedia: Manual of Style, this is acceptable I think.
• types of tennis court → types of tennis courts
  • I'm not too sure. There are multiple types "plural" of court "singular".
• physical contact with it. → physical contact with them.
• categorised → categorized
  • As the first/only major contributor, British English is acceptable in this article.
• equalled → equaled
  • As above
• techincal → technical

Artichoker^[talk] 16:27, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

• The central mode of the game is "Tournament mode", which comprises a set of events of cumulative difficulty which must be completed successfully to unlock playable characters. These can be completed either in "doubles" or "singles" matches is awkward, try The central mode of the game is "Tournament mode", which comprises a set of events with accumulating difficulty. These must be finished successfully to unlock playable characters. This can be completed either in "doubles" or "singles" matches
• "Exhibition mode", which is the standard mode of play → "Exhibition mode", the standard mode of play
• the player can choose their opponents → the player can choose his or her opponents
• All of the characters are categorised into six categories → All of the characters are categorized into six groups
• These moves, which are accompanied with an animation each time they are triggered, are powerful moves that incorporate → These moves, which are accompanied with an animation each time they are triggered, incorporate
• These can only be triggered occasionally in the match → They can only be triggered occasionally in the match
• but will usually result in retrieving or scoring a point, depending on the type of shot chosen. This sentence doesn't make sense to me, I assume by "retrieving" you mean stopping the opponent from scoring?
• Also, I assume that this article lacks a "Plot" or "Story" section because the game doesn't really have a plot?

Overall, everything else looks great. Everything is referenced nicely, etc. So just fix the issues that I have presented, and I think everything will be good to go. Artichoker^[talk] 16:48, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, the game doesn't have a story to it. If I haven't replied to a point, that means I've fixed it accordingly. Thanks for taking the time to review the article. Ashnard _Talk ^Contribs 18:17, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

I have passed the article. Artichoker^[talk] 18:46, 8 July 2008 (UTC)