Talk:Marge Frantz/GA1
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Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 22:39, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
Can attend to shortly. Eddie891 Talk Work 22:39, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for picking this one up Eddie891 Please ping me when you are ready for me to review the comments, as I am hip deep in women's nationality. SusunW (talk) 22:51, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
- "and began work at the Board of Economic Warfare" Might benefit from a brief explanation of context
- University of California, Berkeley is linked on its second mention in the body, but not the first
- "She completed her bachelor's degree with distinction" I'm unfamiliar with what "with distinction" means -- is it a formal recognition?
- Is it "UC, Santa Cruz" or "UC Santa Cruz"?
- So whatever happened to her husband?
- Is it "Scharr" or "Schaar"?
- Sources all reliable, nothing really to add-- Really nice work, just some very minor things. Answering my own question about what happened to her husband, I see now "Frantz's husband began a partnership in Palo Alto with Miriam Patchen". Could you maybe clarify this is a romantic partnership (if it is), not work partnership (as I thought initially). Really nicely done. Eddie891 Talk Work 01:11, 11 March 2021 (UTC)