Talk:Marcos Crespo

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Intensified in topic Neutrality of Extended Bio Section

Neutrality of Extended Bio Section edit

This section of the article appears to have some hefty neutrality issues. The issues in this section appear to be made by someone with the username Marcocrespo85. 85 is the number of the district that the subject of the article represents in the New York Assembly; the username is not exactly giving off a veneer of being an objective editor. Here are some examples of this non-neutrality: "Crespo's hard work and outcome proven approach has allowed him to quickly move into a leadership positions". "In his new post he has moved diligently to address major issues..." "This will tremendously improve living conditions for Bronx residents..." "His hard work has produced major new laws to:..." "He is a prolific bill drafter..."

In fact, it appears that the entirety of the extended bio section has been copy and pasted from the biography on the politician's own website: Marcos A. Crespo Biography — Preceding unsigned comment added by Intensified (talkcontribs) 21:10, 4 July 2018 (UTC)Reply