Talk:Marco Kartodikromo

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Crisco 1492 in topic GA Review
Good articleMarco Kartodikromo has been listed as one of the Language and literature good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 16, 2012Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on April 26, 2012.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Indonesian journalist Marco Kartodikromo (pictured) was arrested several times by the Dutch colonial government and ultimately died in exile?

"Racist"?

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The word 'racist' did not exist in 1911. It was invented by Magnus Hirschfeld in the 1930s.--Q-Jux Q-Jux Q-Jux (talk) 12:02, 26 April 2012 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Marco Kartodikromo/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Tea with toast (talk · contribs) 03:30, 16 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:  
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:  
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
    Well done! --Tea with toast (話) 23:03, 16 June 2012 (UTC)Reply


While I am satisfied that this article meets the criteria for GA, there are few things that might benefit the article moving forward:

  • The first sentence "Further career..." section: "Kartodikromo was soon chosen by Goenawan...". The word "soon" is ambiguous, and it would be better to put a more precise date on that.
  • Sadly none of my sources have a date. They have a nearly 2-year gap in which it could have happened.
  • I feel the "Themes and styles" section could be expanded. Throughout the "Further career..." section, there is not much information given for each of the written works that Kartodikromo authored. I think it would be good to elaborate on these, especially if they were contributing factors for his imprisonment.
  • One of the categories listed is apparently non-existent (red link). While this may not be a problem if the category is to be created in the future, I just thought I'd mention it in case it was a typo (from my investigation, I couldn't find any categories that would replace it, I just thought I'd mention it).

Happy editing! --Tea with toast (話) 23:03, 16 June 2012 (UTC)Reply