Talk:Marcelo Gallardo/GA1

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Gunt50 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 04:19, 12 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • "He had played 109 league games with the club, and scored 18 goals." - add a source
 Y I added a source and did a slight correction on the goals' number in that section + on the infobox
  • Remove the comma after "109 league games with the club".
 Y done --Gunt50 (talk) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Remove the comma after "River Plate in 2004".
 Y done --Gunt50 (talk) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Add serial commas after "Lucas Alario, Carlos Sánchez" and "2015, 2016".
 Y done --Gunt50 (talk) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • "his vision, technique, class, dribbling, and his ability" → "his vision, technique, class, dribbling, and ability"
 Y done --Gunt50 (talk) 20:05, 16 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  Working I'll get to that. I just need to learn how the thing works.--Gunt50 (talk) 21:10, 16 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
Well, I had that bot run. Seems like the sources have been archived. I ran this analyze. I'd appreciate your feedback since it's the first time I use something like that. If the point is not solved yet just let me know how should I proceed.--Gunt50 (talk) 21:52, 16 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
  • Sort categories in alphabetical order.
 Y done --Gunt50 (talk) 20:41, 16 July 2021 (UTC)Reply
GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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