Is this article good enough to remove the template messages now? edit

Hi! I have addressed the 3 points listed in the template to improve this article.

I have changes the language so it doesn't sound like an advertisement, I have added inline citations, and also added better links so that there aren't just bare URLs.

Is that enough to remove the template? Nz18 (talk) 21:30, 1 December 2022 (UTC)Reply