Talk:Mandy Carter (Ackley Bridge)/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by DarkGlow in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:03, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:03, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
edit- Try dividing the lead into two paragraphs.
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
- Mention something from #Development.
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
Storylines
edit- Remove the comma after "pregnant".
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
- "Emma explains to best friend Emma" - who is the first Emma?
- Spelling mistake – fixed. – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
- "to best friend" → "to her best friend"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
- "The trust ask" → "The trust asks"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
- "while on her maternity leave" → "while on maternity leave"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
Development
edit- "well developed" → "well-developed"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
- Remove the comma after "escape for Mandy".
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
- "asked her" → "asked about her"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
Reception
edit- Remove the comma after "comments".
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
- "everyday" → "every day"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
- Link Digital Spy.
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
References
edit- Sources are archived.
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