Talk:Mamba (deep learning architecture)

Latest comment: 20 days ago by 12.201.2.190 in topic Tone & Style

Feedback from New Page Review process edit

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Hello my friend! Good day to you. Thanks for creating the article, I have marked it as reviewed. Have a blessed day!

✠ SunDawn ✠ (contact) 04:10, 13 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Tone & Style edit

The style of this article makes it seem almost like a marketing pitch (e.g., the line saying the potential impacts are "vast"). This page would benefit from a rewrite with more concrete claims and toned down language. Given the nature of the LLM space - and how many companies are trying to commercialize work in this area - it's perhaps inevitable that some degree of commercialism will leak into descriptions, but we should aim to be a bit more objective in the assessments. 12.201.2.190 (talk) 00:44, 6 May 2024 (UTC)Reply