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Here are some tasks awaiting attention:
- Expand : More coverage of the grand strategy (if there was one) of the convoys. Did the British alter their plans, did they react to changes in Italian and German activities. Equally how did the Axis forces modify their actions. Who was in charge? That sort of thing.
Some summary of the effect would be good too. Did the volume of materials convoyed go up or down over the period. By how much did materiel and stockpiles on Malta benefit. Could the article use, for instance, a table of materiel sent and received so a reader could understand how much was getting through? I think these sort of additions would add depth and move it further away from a simple list of the convoys/operations. - NPOV : The feeling of POV applies generally across the article, but it may be that by referencing various statements they can be shown to be fact rather than opinion.
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