Talk:Mall (song)

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Review: April 19, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review edit

Latest comment: 4 years ago12 comments2 people in discussion

This review is transcluded from Talk:Mall (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 23:14, 17 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Infobox edit

Genre: Folk rock → folk elements are not part of the gerne, is just influences

Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:24, 19 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Lead edit

Universal Music → Universal Music via digital download and streaming services
and fans → remove
occasions in Amsterdam and Madrid → occasions, including in Amsterdam and Madrid.

Done

Background and composition edit

song length → songs length
together with → and
With a duration time of three minutes, the Albanian language song → The Albanian language song, which lasts three minutes,
Add the release dates here

Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:25, 19 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Critical reception edit

President Meta additionally praised his voice and performance → very bias

Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:26, 19 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Music video and promotion edit

intercut ten times, and as the video progresses, it additionally features → intercut several times, and as the video progresses, it features
frantic → not very encyclopedic
Add the music video source at the end of the description. Not done

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I hope its correct now.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Festivali i Këngës edit

Fine

Lisbon edit

small band of instrumentalists, → remove instrumentalists

Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:27, 19 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Personnel edit

Fine

Track listing edit

Fine

Release history edit

Fine

References edit

Rate Your Music → non-reliable
Reference 21 → publisher, not work
Reference 33 and 34 → no publisher or work mentioned
The voice source is not working properly → archive it

Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Overall edit

You can now address the issues. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:13, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

@MarioSoulTruthFan:

Done--Lorik17 (talk) 11:57, 19 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

@Iaof2017: I made changes to he genre regarding the sources and you forgot something in the music video section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you, I followed the comment for the music video section, I hope i did it right.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

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