Talk:Make Something Wonderful

Latest comment: 1 year ago by DFlhb in topic Paraphrasing

Paraphrasing

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@DavidCWG, checking with Earwig's tool, I see that there are several parts which are excessively close paraphrases of the WaPo article. Please rephrase these parts so they're less close, without compromising their meaning; it might help to look at more secondary sources rather than relying mainly on one source to write all these paragraphs. Thanks — DFlhb (talk) 16:16, 19 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

I've added quote marks around the two phrases that bothered me. They can still be rephrased, though they're IMO fine now. DFlhb (talk) 19:11, 11 May 2023 (UTC)Reply