Talk:Magic Kids (TV channel)

Latest comment: 11 years ago by March Fox in topic Its painful to read

Its painful to read

edit

It reads like something written by a 5 year old. The article is full of repetitions, convoluted syntax and plain nonsensical paragraphs. I tried correcting some of the most obvious and horrid offenders but by the first sentence on History my soul was broken. The whole article has to be rewritten and some sections (Broadcast list and Chronology) have to be edited down for a more comprehensive reading. I would gladly do it, as it seams no one gives a rat`s ass about this article, but I have a life and it would take me a month or so until I could set some time apart for this particular piece (of ©@я9). So if anyone out there could start editing out some parts it would be great. --M.Fox (talk) 14:41, 2 April 2013 (UTC)Reply