Talk:Maggie Mui

Work that Needs to Be Done

I went through this article and cleaned up a lot of the tone, which, with all due respect, was about as "Neutral" as a D&D Pit Fiend (I will fangirl about Maggie with the best of them and probably win, but not here). I ask future editors to try and do their best to restrain themselves from discussing the complete awesome that is Maggie and stick to facts and Wikipedia's NPOV. Please especially try to refrain from "Fans think that.... " kind of phrasing.

I also added various references to what we learn about her in Read or Dream and what we learn in R.O.D the TV but I realized 80% of the way through it's probably better to actually cite references to the different episodes and volumes in a reference list rahter than pepper the prose with, "In this episode she did this and in that episode she did that" (similar work needs to be done for the other R.O.D character pages). I don't have time to do this on this editing run, but will in a future edit if someone doesn't beat me to it (which is fine by me).

A brief section on Faye needs to be added in the "Relationships" section since she's a major character in Maggie's story arc in Read or Dream; I deleted most of the description of her in the "personality" section with the intention of adding one there, but didn't have time to finish the edit.

There are some neat comments about the evolution of Maggie's character design in the DVD extras (e.g., her original concept design turned into Junior's); could these be notable enough to add in a "miscellaneous notes" section? DeathQuaker (talk) 22:55, 5 March 2008 (UTC)