Talk:Mac Mini/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 01:14, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

• Images need alt text – see MOS:ALT.
• The lead seems a bit large – see MOS:LEADLENGTH.
• Avoid one-sentence paragraphs – see MOS:BODY.
• A lot of sections are unsourced.
• #Reception could use an expansion.

Bottom note, this article needs a major copyedit, the addition of sources for verification, and an expansion. Quick failing for now since the article feels like a C-article and is a long way from GA-status but feel free to renominate when my notes above have been addressed. For future reference, check the entire article before nominating. Also make sure it follows the WP:GACR. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:16, 18 July 2021 (UTC)

What do you think about the revisions? Wingwatchers (talk) 04:57, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina Wingwatchers (talk) 04:57, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

@Wingwatchers: Looks good now with recent edits. Since this GAN is closed, I would suggest nominating it again. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:44, 25 September 2021 (UTC)