Talk:Ma Jiyuan

Massacre of communist POWs by hui and han soldiers of ma jiyuan's 82nd division

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Rajmaan (talk) 05:57, 19 November 2012 (UTC)

Article in desperate need of revision

The grammar is all over the place, and the page struggles to maintain coherency even within individual sentences. It reads more like a collection of factoids and trivia facts than any meaningful telling of Ma Jiyuan's life. The article needs a substantive rehaul in most all sections. Defaulting (talk) 22:32, 18 October 2022 (UTC)