Talk:Lyptus

Latest comment: 17 years ago by Phidauex in topic Rewrite complete

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This article reads like an ad, like the ad that can be found at [1] seems to be word-for-word Sosobra 22:42, 6 September 2006 (UTC)Reply

Good catch! This article is just an ad. I've begun a complete rewrite to remove this problem. Lyptus is an interesting product, and is talked about a lot, so it needs a good Wikipedia article. I welcome any further additions. Phidauex 01:07, 28 November 2006 (UTC)Reply

Rewrite complete

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This article has been rewritten to remove all advertising copy. Its not perfect, of course, but its a good start now. Phidauex 01:35, 28 November 2006 (UTC)Reply