Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit

  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 August 2019 and 16 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Mollymmadison. Peer reviewers: Tyler.Flathau.

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment edit

  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 27 August 2019 and 5 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Kelly989.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:59, 17 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Evaluation edit

Content edit

  1. The material that is there is organized, but because there is two sections.
  2. Presentation is understandable, but rewording could be beneficial to the flow.
  3. This article only briefly covers the topic. It is missing sections like description, range, and habitat.
  4. There's no evidence anywhere on the page.
  5. There were no references, and it seems like someones background knowledge.
  6. The intro paragraph could use some rewording, and it needs references.

Quality edit

  1. There's an intro, but but it's short and lacks references.
  2. Intro's understandable - short and simple. It could use a sentence for a brief description and some rewording.
  3. There's only an intro and a list of species. It needs sections like description, range, and habitat.
  4. Missing information like a more in-depth description, range, and habitat.
  5. There are a two pictures appropriately placed. Both are of the same species, so there could be an addition of another species.
  6. The info is unbiased.
  7. The only fact emphasized is the common name b/c it's in bold and there is not much other info.
  8. There are no references.

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Kelly989 (talkcontribs) 04:02, 24 October 2019 (UTC)Reply


When editing the page, I added citations, including to the existing intro. I also added the sections Description, Region & Habitat, and Life Cycle and removed a broken link from the "External Links" section.Kelly989 (talk) 04:43, 21 November 2019 (UTC)Reply