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Grammar edit
Infobox photo caption is missing something, famous cases section has many typing errors/reckless pattern 78.1.202.19 (talk) 02:29, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
Last 12 Month Lupus Wiki-Talk-Page Traffic edit
As of July 4th 2023 :
Last twelve month daily average viewers : 3,825 page visitors
Last twelve month total views : approximately 1.4 M page views — Preceding unsigned comment added by 184.74.5.194 (talk) 11:20, 5 July 2023 (UTC)
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Identical twin susceptibility/ edit
In the intro it says a 24% concordance for identical twins; in the 'genetics' section it says 35%. Which is it, please? 110.141.141.172 (talk) 10:45, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
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I recommend removing "Diagnostic criteria" There are no diagnostic criteria for systemic lupus There are only classification criteria, which are specifically for including patients into research studies. However, physicians often use the classification criteria to help guide their diagnoses of systemic lupus Resource for this suggestion: https://acrjournals.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/epdf/10.1002/acr.22583
Aggarwal R, Ringold S, Khanna D, Neogi T, Johnson SR, Miller A, Brunner HI, Ogawa R, Felson D, Ogdie A, Aletaha D, Feldman BM. Distinctions between diagnostic and classification criteria? Arthritis Care Res (Hoboken). 2015 Jul;67(7):891-7. doi: 10.1002/acr.22583. PMID: 25776731; PMCID: PMC4482786.
After the line "Neurologic disorder: Seizures or psychosis; sensitivity = 20%; specificity = 98%.[86]" I recommend that the two newer classification be added in a manner similar to how the ACR criteria is already presented.
The two newer criteria are:
2012 SLICC criteria (use table 3 from this link:https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1002/art.34473)
and
2019 ACR/EULAR criteria (use figure 2 from this link: https://assets.contentstack.io/v3/assets/bltee37abb6b278ab2c/blt78b4c1b38aa0039b/systemic-lupus-erythematosus-classification-criteria-complete-article-2019.pdf) Donthomasj (talk) 18:01, 15 October 2023 (UTC)
Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. Awhellnawr123214 (talk) 03:34, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
Famous case edit
Assyrian king Esarhaddon is suspected to have suffered from Lupus by Finnish Assyriologist Simo Parpola.
Parpola, Simo: Letters from Assyrian Scholars to the Kings Esarhaddon and Assurbanipal, 2007, p.232. https://www.google.de/books/edition/Letters_from_Assyrian_Scholars_to_the_Ki/JimYncnzaOkC?hl=de&gbpv=1&dq=Parpola+%22esarhaddon+as+systemic+lupus%22&pg=PA232&printsec=frontcover 2001:1A81:5396:6500:4901:9698:929E:832E (talk) 23:35, 4 January 2024 (UTC)