Talk:Lunafreya Nox Fleuret/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 01:05, 8 May 2022 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this. Sorry for the big delay like with Samurai Champloo. First of all:

Lead

• There is little introduction to who is Noctis. Simply add that he is the game's protagonist.
• Same with Tabata. Director right?
• Add the year of the release of the movie.

Origins

• The commentary of Stella goes a bit far such as how Nomura wanted to illustrate her.
• "Despite negative reactions from fans, Tabata defended the change as the best option, allowing fans to continue liking Stella and view her replacement as a new character without preconceptions or expectations.[13][14]" Doesn't this belong more to the reception section?

Development

• "featuring Aerith Gainsborough in Final Fantasy VII." everybody knows this but I would explain that VII is also another Final Fantasy game.
• I would recommend putting Tabata's free image since he is highly responsible for this character.
• "The game's Yoshitaka Amano-designed logo art, initially described as a goddess, represented a version of Lunafreya." Is this a scrapped idea or related with the whole oracle?

Appearances

• I would add explain that Eos is a world (unless I forgot something from the game)

Reception

• This all look reads nice but I would suggest adding intros to each paragraph since they have different focus.

That's all. Revise this and I'll pass it.Tintor2 (talk) 01:05, 8 May 2022 (UTC)

@Tintor2: Hopefully addressed everything above. It's been somewhat refreshing working on an article for such a disliked character. Like Zero (Drakengard) all over again. --ProtoDrake (talk) 07:58, 8 May 2022 (UTC)