Talk:Luang Por Khun Parissuddho

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Wokepedian in topic Needs better English in 'Dharma life' section?

Needs better English in 'Dharma life' section? edit

The first paragraph is fine, but the second appears to be have been written by someone who doesn't have English as their first language. I appreciate their adding material but it is rather confusing, and I don't know enough about the monk's life to edit it without losing valuable context. Of special attention is the use of the word 'so' rather oddly. As far as I can make out 'then' seems to make more sense. With this in mind I will try to improve it. Wokepedian (talk) 12:34, 3 January 2022 (UTC)Reply