Talk:Love in This Club/GA1
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GA Review
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Reviewer:--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 21:04, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Nice
Background
edit- despite his marriage to stylist Tameka Foster in July 2007 -> women wouldn't like his music because he's married?
- Well, he had become less popular since his marriage. Reworded a bit. Adabow (talk · contribs) 21:59, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
Composition
edit- Fraser McAlpine of BBC Radio 1 says -> said, wrote
Release and critical reception
edit- Nice
Chart performance
edit- on the Billboard Hot 100 on the issue dated March 1, 2008 at number eighty-three -> reads better, "debuted at number eighty-three on the '"
Music Video
edit- Is there a better photo? The description says they are "dancing intimately" but the photo only shows their faces. Not a big deal if you can't.
- Removed. It's not really that important and probably fails WP:NFCC. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:02, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
- where he gave the song. -> sang, performed
Covers
editAre there sources for these?
- Overall there were almost no errors, good job! Once their fixed I'll gladly pass it :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 21:40, 8 December 2010 (UTC)
- Passed :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 23:41, 8 December 2010 (UTC)