Talk:Looking for Magical Doremi/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:08, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments later in the week. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 22:08, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• "Release and marketing" should be an actual section, not a subsection.
• "Soundtrack" should become a section titled "Music" and should also be moved under production.
• Move the box office information from "Reception" to "Release and marketing".
• "Accolades" should be a subsection under reception, and since it's only one award, it should be in prose rather than a table.
  •  Done lullabying (talk) 03:28, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

• Archive all sources (you can use this to help.)
• Infobox, lead, and plot sections look good.
• Is there a reason only some characters have references, and others don't?
• Couldn't find any problems with production or release and marketing.
• In reception, Anime News Network and Natalie should not be in italics.
  •  Done Added references for other cast members. Link to bot doesn't work. Can you explain why Anime News Network and Natalie shouldn't be italicized? They're names of publications. lullabying (talk) 17:54, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

• @Lullabying: Anime News Network and Natalie shouldn't be italicized because they're publishers and as they're own Wiki-articles aren't italicized either. Additionally, references still need to be archived (this can also be done manually with this or this). Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 18:14, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

• • •  Done lullabying (talk) 21:28, 27 January 2021 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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