Talk:Longleaf pine ecosystem

Latest comment: 1 year ago by PrimeBOT in topic Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment

needs a rewrite edit

This is an informative entry, but it contains careless misspellings and some infelicities of style that a writing instructor would flag. Somebody needs to attend to these. I'm just passing through.130.74.201.72 (talk) 13:59, 6 September 2018 (UTC)Reply

Needs rebuild/refocus edit

Standard primitivist treatment needs better nuance (no tobacco mentioned, cotton section nonsensically postdates Civil War and omits slavery & effect of cotton cultivation on soil, if WWI somehow worse than railroad era explain how, etc) and more realism about Native American/Indian involvement. a) This patently wasn't the default ecosystem if required careful fire management: it was a created thing; b) the forested bits of it expanded hugely following smallpox depopulation, rather than being somehow damaged by fewer fires; c) most importantly, it was well on its way to being replaced or restructured prior to English dominion b/c of NA/I love for the hogs & peach trees introduced by the Spanish, both of which quickly spread like wildfire.

There's also the discrepency btwn initial 75% and later 97% reduction claims & omission of discussion of rots & pests such as those that nixed the American chestnut. — LlywelynII 12:05, 26 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment edit

  This article is the subject of an educational assignment at Clemson University supported by the Wikipedia Ambassador Program during the 2011 Q3 term. Further details are available [[Wikipedia:United States Education Program/Courses/Accelerated Composition (Patricia Fancher)|on the course page]].

The above message was substituted from {{WAP assignment}} by PrimeBOT (talk) on 17:00, 2 January 2023 (UTC)Reply