Talk:London-class battleship/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: L293D (talk · contribs) 02:47, 29 November 2018 (UTC)Reply


Image review

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Every image was necessarily taken before 1923, so that's easy.

Infobox

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Everything consistent with prose.

Lead

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  • London-class ships began to be transferred to - both active and passive voice, reword
    • Done
  • but they were withdrawn in May to reinforce the Italian fleet blockading the Austro-Hungarian Navy in the Adriatic Sea. - link Otranto Barrage and specify that the blockade was successful only in blockading surface ships, U-boats could pass through easily
    • Done

Construction

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  • Change section title to "Ships" or something like that
    • I prefer the current heading, since it's a summary of the construction of the ships, and it's an easy link in the ToC for a reader who might want to know when the ships were built.

Really impressive article - I've had a hard time finding anything to suggest. L293D ( • ) 17:44, 3 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for your review. Parsecboy (talk) 19:27, 4 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

GA Progress

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
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