Talk:Loin Like a Hunting Flame

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review
Good articleLoin Like a Hunting Flame has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starLoin Like a Hunting Flame is part of the Millennium (season 1) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Millennium's "Loin Like a Hunting Flame" took its name from a Dylan Thomas poem?
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:28, 1 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

Only a few small issues:

*Plot: "The Millennium Group, a private investigative firm, have despatched offender profilers Frank Black (Lance Henriksen) and Maureen Murphy (Harriet Sansom Harris) to aid the police investigation." Reword into "The Millennium Group, a private investigative firm, despatches offender profilers Frank Black (Lance Henriksen) and Maureen Murphy (Harriet Sansom Harris) to aid the police investigation." *Plot: What is an "off-license" I think that is a British slang term, but it probably shouldn't be used in an American episode article. *Plot: "with Black believing that the killer not only has access to it through his occupation but is likely to consume it himself while committing his crimes in order to readily act on his sexual fantasies" Rewrite to "with Black believing that the killer not only has access to it through his occupation but is likely consuming it himself while committing his crimes in order to readily act on his sexual fantasies."

On hold for seven days to fix. BTW, reading these Millennium articles is making me depressed. ;) Sounds like a pretty grim show!--Gen. Quon (talk) 17:57, 1 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

Oh, man, if you think that's depressing, try watching them. When the show worked it really worked ("522666", "Dead Letters", Goodbye Charlie" and "Jose Chung's Doomsday Device" spring to mind) but mostly it was pretty horrible in every sense of the word. Worth a watch once though, just to see what they managed to get away with. Have made the changes you've suggested. Thanks for the review! GRAPPLE X 20:52, 1 March 2012 (UTC)Reply
No problem! I'll need to watch these some day, they are, after all, in the X-Files sphere of awesome. I pass the article.--Gen. Quon (talk) 21:55, 1 March 2012 (UTC)Reply